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Monday, 02 April 2007
Peter Baroth’s novel Long Green is a well-crafted, absorbing read.  It moves
at the right pace.  The language is clear, sometimes musical.  The story
doesn’t drag because of too much description.  It moves.

The novel is basically a tragic love story.  The two main characters, Harry
and Liz, are a mess.  Harry is sure he’s just flunked his bar exam and Liz
is a recovering alcoholic.  They’re both moving into their late 20’s.

Read the review by Pat King!

Peter Baroth:  Long Green

Peter contacted me to see about getting this review done a while ago, writing that it had been submitted to another writers' organization and gotten, uh, lost...or something.  This was when this review blog was on another site, and under another name.  I thought, what the heck, if he went to the trouble to send in his book, and it was apparently accepted to be reviewed, then, well....  Pat King, bless his heart, offered to review the novel, and, judging from the review below, it has all worked out very well!

The novel can be purchased at www.iuniverse.com.

 

Reviewed by Pat King

 

Peter Baroth’s novel Long Green is a well-crafted, absorbing read.  It moves

at the right pace.  The language is clear, sometimes musical.  The story

doesn’t drag because of too much description.  It moves.


The novel is basically a tragic love story.  The two main characters, Harry

and Liz, are a mess.  Harry is sure he’s just flunked his bar exam and Liz

is a recovering alcoholic.  They’re both moving into their late 20’s.


The novel begins on the morning after Liz and Harry’s first date.  They had

a night of wild sex and now Harry is tossing about in bed (he has a problem

falling asleep after having sex).  Both eventually wonder to themselves

whether rushing into bed was a mistake.  The opening scene is wonderfully

written, capturing perfectly the turbulence of a first night with a

stranger.  There’s real tension, but real curiosity.  An adventure is

starting and both of them know it.


The novel takes place in Vermont.  Harry’s living in his parents’ cabin,

delivering pizzas and waiting for his own version of heaven on earth: ski

season.  And while he’s waiting for heaven, he’s in a sort of purgatory.  

He’s in limbo.  What will he do for the rest of his life?  Liz asks the same

question.  She was a successful art student until drinking took over and now

she’s working at her cousin’s bakery, waiting.  For what exactly?  Where

does she go?  Where can she go?


These are the novel’s central questions.  The novel is a love story because

it’s about two people who are in love with the idea of the future, of  its

possibilities, especially during a time when all they have is possibilities.

  Perhaps they’ll also fall in love with each other.  Or maybe, in each

other, they can only find temporary meaning.


I highly recommend this novel and I’ll be sure to look for future novels by

Mr. Baroth.  His novel can be purchased at www.iuniverse.com.


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1. 03-04-2007 06:29
 
Peter is an awesome poet and I am sure he is just as good as prose.
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2. 04-04-2007 20:23
 
Long Green
A remarkable attribute of this book is the character development--not only in description but the changes that take place in the characters through the progression of the story. It is also a story that authentically depicts the angst of a generation, not only in personal or romantic relationships but also in how people judge their own self-worth--personally and in the society in which they live. The title 'Long Green' is particularly interesting: a long adolescence, a long shot for par? Or it is reminiscent of Lohengrin? If Liz and Harry get too close, if the wrong questions dare be asked, will they simply disappear? This is an important book.
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3. 07-04-2007 08:16
 
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The book really nicely captures a very particular time in a person's life -- Harry Jones is a sort of slightly older, late-80s/early 90s Holden Caulfield, commenting on his own place in a society that continually pushes him to its fringes. The passages that have to do with music are transcendent. And I am 100% biased, but I would recommend this book to anyone who has had to transition into or out of insecure/uncomfortable/unwelcoming times. So, yeah, anybody could find something of him or herself in this book.
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4. 09-04-2007 16:56
 
Pleased
I am incredibly pleased by the review and the comments.
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5. 27-12-2007 02:16
 
Pleased
Sound like a great book!! Peter Baroth rocks! :-)
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