THE MAN CAVE–Poetry Series with Hosho McCreesh

March 20, 2009
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& The Problem Is That
It’s Just Too Easy To Forgetself-portrait2
What Kind Of World We
Live In…

Years ago, by now,
& walking downtown,
I happened on a pretty woman,
early 40s, her arms tangled
around odd-sized boxes,
her soft brown hair
dangling annoyingly in her face,
& I could tell she wanted it
tucked over an ear,
& the problem is that
it’s just too easy to forget
what kind of world we
live in

so
as we passed, without really thinking,
I reached out
to tuck her bangs for her,
& she suddenly flinched,
contorted, reared back twisting,
& almost dropped her boxes,
her bright eyes lit
with fury & fear.

“I’m sorry,” I said,
“I’m sorry…I could
just tell you wanted
your hair out of your eyes,
I’m sorry…”

…& we walked away
from one another
both sure that
I was
insane.




5 Responses to THE MAN CAVE–Poetry Series with Hosho McCreesh

  1. avatar
    Kristin Fouquet on March 20, 2009 at 1:50 pm

    I must be insane because I think I would have appreciated the gesture. Just ordered the last book (released on my birthday) and am looking forward to it.

  2. avatar
    Grace Andreacchi on March 24, 2009 at 11:58 am

    Thoughtful and thought-provoking poem. I once had something similar happen to me – I was standing in line at a wine shop and the man behind me in line tucked the label of my dress back in – I felt this hand on my back and turned round and this man, looking foolish , said ‘ The label was sticking out of your dress…’ I was both alarmed and touched.

  3. avatar
    Josh Olsen on March 24, 2009 at 1:55 pm

    Great poem about such a simple, yet socially daring, moment. Its funny, you can slap someone on the ass and not get that kind of response.

  4. avatar
    Eugenia on March 29, 2009 at 11:45 pm

    This says so much. Your capture of the split second connection(s) and respose(s) is just perfection.

  5. avatar
    Hosh on March 30, 2009 at 3:23 pm

    Thanks everyone for the kind words & support. I really appreciate it.